My Original Song, Please Tell Me What You Think?

I only have one post that's a studio recording and the rest are all
"live" I'm going to post the studio one here, tell me what you think
of it and if you want you can watch more original songs and covers in
the related videos.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CTmpL1HlCzc

Thanks! Let me know what you think!
He did :)